Bonjour, j'aimerais savoir si mon texte est bon car je l'ai fais sur reverso et ce n'est pas toujours fiable, Hello, I have to tell you! I am in California on
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Bonjour, j'aimerais savoir si mon texte est bon car je l'ai fais sur reverso et ce n'est pas toujours fiable,
" Hello, I have to tell you!
I am in California on the West the USA;
- I have already visited Hollywood Boulevard and Beverly Hill, I met a star.
- I am already go on Golden Gate Bridge to San Francisco, I took many photos.
I have not visited the prison of Alcatraz in San Francisco yet and I have not explored the district Chinatown Gateway yet.
I am going to go to go shopping to Rodeo Drive to Beverly Hill and I am going to go to walk on the stars of Hollywood Bouvelard
Goodbye "
Voilà,merci.
" Hello, I have to tell you!
I am in California on the West the USA;
- I have already visited Hollywood Boulevard and Beverly Hill, I met a star.
- I am already go on Golden Gate Bridge to San Francisco, I took many photos.
I have not visited the prison of Alcatraz in San Francisco yet and I have not explored the district Chinatown Gateway yet.
I am going to go to go shopping to Rodeo Drive to Beverly Hill and I am going to go to walk on the stars of Hollywood Bouvelard
Goodbye "
Voilà,merci.
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1. Réponse Morganelc
I am in California on the West of the USA ---> C'est mieux je crois ;)
I haven't visited the..... ---> A revérifié je suis pas sur... :x
Im going to do shopping ---> Pas sur non plus mais c'est se que j'écrirais ;)
J'espère t'avoir aidé ♥